Tuesday, July 6, 2010

BR-12


Rainbow Machine

The Rainbow Machine

This story’s main characters are rainbow makers.
Rainbow markers are seven and wearing seven colors clothes.
Red and pink, blue and green and orange, yellow and purple.
They look like ordinary people don’t look like special people.
They have works for make rainbow, first they sure make rainbow.
Second they also clean and look after the rainbow machine.
I want to miniature rainbow machine and them.
So I will have them make mini rainbow in many places.
For example, my bedroom and my university in class, outside.
Do you think this idea is very good?
Because if you feel unpleasant or worry.
You can make rainbow so you feel good or better.
Rainbows make you to recreation and rainbow gives you many dream and hope. I think so this.

By the way, an event occurred in this story.
One day rainbow markers go out lunch without Fred.
He is a new and young so he has to be warden for their lorry.
This lorry has a big Rainbow Machine on the back.
So this is important very much.
Then Fred saw a traffic warden.
He thought that this is a fine kettle of fish.
So he decided that the lorry move anywhere.
He drove it and stuck in the mud.
I think Fred is unlucky…
The lorry snack deeper and deeper…
Fortunately Biff and Chip came up with Wilf, Nadim and Anneena.
Fred asked them for help.
Children helped him but it could not be.
However, it is just time Rainbow is needed.
Fred has to make rainbow without other rainbow markers.
Children helped him all things.
But they don’t know how to use this machine, Fred too.
Nadim was good at use computers. So he operated rainbow keyboard.
But he didn’t do well.
Rainbows ran the bases recklessly.
Rainbow made many shapes.
Square and waving, broken rainbow and twisted, drawn word ‘’have a nice day’’
This is very interesting. I want to see at least once.
Rainbow was leaking and all the red was running out!
This is very trouble thing.
Then other rainbow markers come back and they scold for Fred.
But Fred didn’t do anything.
Nadim did. So he said that ‘’ please don’t blame Fred’’
He reflected.
Other rainbow markers have very gentle minds.
They forgave him for his mistake.
And they deal with the red sky.
The red sky becomes white sky.
Then magic key growing and children back in a garden.
The sky has returned to blue and the sun is yellow.

The last, children think that’’ it’s really made like that?’’
I want to be really like that. Because that is very fantastic!!
Someday I look for the rainbow markers and machine.




Records

Book:
Hunt, R. (1990). The Rainbow Machine. Univercity: Oxford Reading Tree.


[466 words]

4 comments:

  1. Hi Yui,

    This book reviews seems like a bit of an anomaly. Your others were all under 150 words in length. Why is this one so much longer?

    Please let me know.

    Cheers, PB

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  2. i just tried write so long and i got like this book.

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  3. Thanks for letting me know. I recommend writing book reviews as quickly as you can, and largely from memory. That is with the books closed.

    Then, when you've finished writing about what you recall of the main episodes or points - without giving away the ending - you might open the book again, and quote your favorite line with a short page reference.

    By the way, is the photo in this BR of a rainbow in Japan?

    Cheers, PB

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  4. they have a car for make the rainbow.
    my favotite line is this part.
    this is such as dream.

    and this phot was taken by me in Japan!

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